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Corrective peer-feedback in an L2 Academic Writing context from three perspectives

Research Project

Project/Area Number 22K00737
Research Category

Grant-in-Aid for Scientific Research (C)

Allocation TypeMulti-year Fund
Section一般
Review Section Basic Section 02100:Foreign language education-related
Research InstitutionKyushu University

Principal Investigator

アームストロング マシュー  九州大学, 言語文化研究院, 准教授 (40435128)

Project Period (FY) 2022-04-01 – 2025-03-31
Project Status Granted (Fiscal Year 2023)
Budget Amount *help
¥1,560,000 (Direct Cost: ¥1,200,000、Indirect Cost: ¥360,000)
Fiscal Year 2024: ¥130,000 (Direct Cost: ¥100,000、Indirect Cost: ¥30,000)
Fiscal Year 2023: ¥780,000 (Direct Cost: ¥600,000、Indirect Cost: ¥180,000)
Fiscal Year 2022: ¥650,000 (Direct Cost: ¥500,000、Indirect Cost: ¥150,000)
KeywordsAcademic Writing / Peer Feedback / Learner Development / Meaningful Dialogue / Corrective Peer Feedback
Outline of Research at the Start

This research will explore the benefits of developing a cooperative learning environment which could foster students’ ability to identify and solve problems and promote critical analysis of academic writing in three learning environments: Information and communication technology (ICT), Face-to-face, and Blended learning.

Outline of Annual Research Achievements

The second year of this Kakenhi Research project has progressed according to the planned schedule. Based on findings from FY2022-2023, the researcher adapted teaching materials to students preferred feedback style. Student preferences showed that face-to-face dialogic feedback with peers in the classroom was the most effective approach to improve critical writing skills. Online feedback with the teacher via Google Docs was preferred to written comments on printed assignments. This was due to students wanting a more direct line of communication with the teacher to clarify comments and ask questions. Students also found it difficult to understand teachers written comments. FY2023-2024 data closely examined the quantity as well as quality of feedback comments in face to face and online contexts. Students from six writing classes (n=110) were giving the same tasks as in the previous year in order to compare findings. Comments were classified into four categories reflected in the grading rubric (structure, language, format, and content) and the researcher analysed the number of comments assigned to each category in addition to the level of insightfulness in feedback comments which impacted the peer review process.

Current Status of Research Progress
Current Status of Research Progress

2: Research has progressed on the whole more than it was originally planned.

Reason

The project is progressing smoothly. Sufficient data has been collected from over 400 students over two years in both face-to-face and online contexts to effectively conduct a comparative analysis. More data was collected in the face-to-face context than online but this did not affect data analysis procedures. Patterns have emerged from data analysis which illustrate best peer-feedback practices for this particular as well as general academic writing contexts. Findings have been presented at international and domestic conferences. In FY 2024-2025, key findings will be presented at two domestic and one international conference.

Strategy for Future Research Activity

No changes are expected to the current research plan. The researcher has collected sufficient data and completed 80% of the analysis. The final 20% of data analysis will be conducted on semester 2’s data which is currently being done. The analysis should be completed in July. The goal for the final year of this kakenhi project (FY2024-2025) is to publish the findings in two peer review journals. The research has already been accepted to present at conferences in Fukui, Tokyo, and London.

Report

(2 results)
  • 2023 Research-status Report
  • 2022 Research-status Report
  • Research Products

    (6 results)

All 2024 2023 2022

All Journal Article (2 results) (of which Open Access: 1 results) Presentation (4 results) (of which Int'l Joint Research: 4 results)

  • [Journal Article] Exploring Face-to-Face vs. Online Feedback Approaches in Academic Writing Courses2024

    • Author(s)
      Armstrong Matthew
    • Journal Title

      The Asian Conference on Education 2023

      Volume: - Pages: 1997-2006

    • DOI

      10.22492/issn.2186-5892.2024.169

    • Related Report
      2023 Research-status Report
  • [Journal Article] Feedback in L2 Academic Writing: Prescriptive or Developmental?2023

    • Author(s)
      Matthew Armstrong
    • Journal Title

      The Asian Conference on Education 2022: Official Conference Proceedings

      Volume: - Pages: 163-173

    • DOI

      10.22492/issn.2186-5892.2023.14

    • Related Report
      2022 Research-status Report
    • Open Access
  • [Presentation] Face-to-Face vs. Online Feedback Approaches and Comments in Academic Writing Courses2023

    • Author(s)
      Matthew Armstrong
    • Organizer
      The Asian Conference on Education (ACE 2023)
    • Related Report
      2023 Research-status Report
    • Int'l Joint Research
  • [Presentation] Learner Profiles: A Holistic Approach to Understanding the Whole Learner2023

    • Author(s)
      Matthew Armstrong
    • Organizer
      IATEFL2023
    • Related Report
      2023 Research-status Report
    • Int'l Joint Research
  • [Presentation] Exploring Learner Development through Dynamic Peer-to-Peer Dialogue2023

    • Author(s)
      Matthew Armstrong
    • Organizer
      The International Society for Self-Directed Learning (ISSDL2023)
    • Related Report
      2022 Research-status Report
    • Int'l Joint Research
  • [Presentation] Feedback in L2 Academic Writing: Prescriptive or Developmental?2022

    • Author(s)
      Matthew Armstrong
    • Organizer
      The 14th Asian Conference on Education (ACE2022)
    • Related Report
      2022 Research-status Report
    • Int'l Joint Research

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Published: 2022-04-19   Modified: 2024-12-25  

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